60 seconds capture audienceAt Big Fish Presentations a lot of clients come to us to not only design their presentations, but also to write them. While we handle content matter from multiple industries, we notice there are some classic similarities when it comes to delivering a convincing presentation.

And while we know it’s not an easy task to captivate someone willingly giving up their time and money, there are characteristics we’ve found to help you win over any audience and land (most) big deals:

Tell Stories

Telling stories allows the audience to create a personal connection with you and your product or service. Stories are great, as they not only have the potential to tell the audience WHAT you do, but WHY you do it. This is important, because people want to connect with you to understand what drives you to represent your company.

Just remember that stories feature three key elements:

  1. The Villain: This is the problem that hurts your customers’ quality of life. Characterize the villain in a real dastardly way and let the customer know what happens if the villain prevails.
  2. The Hero: This is your solution. Give the backstory of the hero and how they rose up to fight the villain. Let the customer be part of the hero’s journey to prevail and how, by believing in your solution, the world can be a better place.
  3. Suspense: Your story should never flat line – it should have action throughout. From what happens when the villain is introduced, to when the villain and hero confront, lead your customer on a tale that will help them not only make a logical decision that feels emotionally correct.

Sit down and practice a story that has the ability to move an audience. The way you tell it needs to be suspenseful and open-ended. The audience needs to participate in order for the hero to prevail.

We crave stories

Here’s an example of our story:
In January 2011, two college students Kenny Nguyen and Gus Murillo were super excited to watch a speech by a Fortune 500 executive. Getting to the event early, they prepared themselves to be intellectually blown away and got front row seats for the experience. However, when the Fortune executive loaded up his presentation, they saw 200 slides at the bottom right-hand corner of his PowerPoint deck. It was then they realized that tonight was going to be rough.

And that it was.

What they saw was the most boring presentation of their lives. Imagine 200 slides, with no pictures but just text. Worst of all – the presenter read every single slide. It wasn’t an experience, it was a nightmare.

While sitting there completely miserable, Kenny and Gus thought to themselves, “Wow, what a waste of time.”

That led into another thought.

“Man, if the worlds biggest companies are presenting like this, chances are the world’s next big idea won’t be heard.”

Then another thought.

“What if there was a company that would rid the world of boring presentations?”

That’s when another thought hit.

“What if we could help bad presenters deliver experiences? Wouldn’t we be able to change the world.”

From this moment, the idea of Big Fish Presentations was born.


In this brief story, the villain is the thought of eternal boring presentations preventing good ideas to be heard, the heroes are Kenny and Gus, and the suspense is the realization of an opportunity. I tell this story when talking about Big Fish Presentations in most keynotes I deliver, as I know other professionals can relate. We’ve all seen boring presentations in our lives. Telling this story helps others appreciate the reason why we do what we do.

It builds an emotional connection.

Remember: Telling a powerful story can be the decision maker when opening or closing a pitch.

Create Structure

Good presentations have structure and flow. The audience should be excited and surprised with what you have to say, but they should also know where they currently stand in the presentation. Imagine being lost in an hour-long pitch. No matter how wonderful the presenter is you’ll still wonder where they’re taking you in their presentation.

Here’s a common structure we recommend for presentations:

Opener (Story, question, statistic, joke, quote, or attention grabber)
Explanation of opener (How the opener relates to the theme of the presentation)
Preview of topics (Provide a roadmap for the audience)
Thesis statement (Preview of the call to action)

Main Point One – Main Point Three
Body text that supports thesis statement
Include transition statement to identify when moving from one point to the next

Recap of Topics
Recollection of topics with main points and how it relates to the call to action

Call to Action

Conclusion (No new facts in conclusion)
Closing (Story, question, statistic, joke, quote, etc.)

Creating a structure and roadmap not only helps the audience identify where they are, but also helps you pace your presentation as a speaker.

Practicing your presentation in parts will help you more easily nail a specific section. After you practice all the parts, you’ll be more easily able to remember your content, as there’s less pressure in the beginning to memorize the entire speech.

Keep it Simple

When it comes to delivering presentations, it’s important to make sure you know your audience. Knowing your audience will not only ensure you don’t alienate them, but also identify what they want to hear.

Here are some simple tips on how to keep things simple in a presentation:

  • Ask yourself, “Am I explaining complex topics simply enough where my grandmother could understand it?”
  • Does the audience understand the data I’m presenting easily?
    • Classic example is Steve Jobs: While presenting the iPod he appealed to the techies by explaining how much space it had, and then explained how many songs it could hold. This helps two different audiences appreciate the same product.
  • Are my visuals and slides simplistic? Do they tell the story, or do my words?
    • You should be the presentation, not the slideshow. See our SlideShare here for good examples of simplistic design.

Big Ask

Simplicity is harder to reach in presentations. Trust us, we know. However, we can’t stress its importance. If you’re able to take complex topics and make them easy to understand for the general audience, you create credibility for yourself and your craft.

We specifically wrote about how to tackle this in an article on developing Ethos, Logos, and Pathos as a presenter, and how being simplistic can help boost your appeal as a speaker.

Have a Call-to-Action

Having a call to action is critical in a presentation as it heightens the suspense between you and your audience. If there’s no call to action, you just wasted your audience’s time. Presentations are meant to persuade, convince, and empower, so if there’s no request for change, there’s a flat line in the presentation. Everyone will leave the same.

Leave your audience thinking

Below are some examples of different ways you can have a call to action:

1) The question, or “big ask,” requires an audience to change the way they think and feel about your topic.

“When are you going to do your part in the fight against world hunger?”

2) The demand urges the audience to move immediately. This is more effective on issues based on trust or dire situations where time is an issue. Remember: It’s always better to be assertive than aggressive.

“In this job market, you either brand yourself or you die.”

3) The offer immediately gives the audience something in return for their decision. People have a hard time turning down an easy deal, so by presenting them with a guaranteed prize of some kind, you’re prompting action in your favor.

“If you sign up today, you’ll receive a free Visa gift card and a round-trip ticket to Aspen, Colorado.”

So think of your call to action first when you begin writing the presentation. This will always help you prepare the content in a way that effectively supports your argument.


Your pitch has to be logically and emotionally convincing for the audience. Creating great content is just as important as delivering a great presentation. And while practice is important, don’t forget to hone your story, lead your audience, make things simple, and always ask them to change themselves for the better.

Have any questions, comments, or suggestions on what you believe are the perfect ways to pitch? Please leave a comment below to get in touch.

About Kenny Nguyen:

Kenny Nguyen

Big Fish Presentations

Kenny Nguyen is the CEO/Founder of Big Fish Presentations, a company whose mantra is “turning presentations into experiences.” Kenny and his team work daily with clients nationwide, from Fortune 100 level to startups, providing high quality presentation design, training, and creative video. Kenny has been featured on popular news outlets such as TEDx, Forbes, Entrepreneur Magazine, Yahoo, Business Insider, Mashable, Huffington Post, and the Washington Post.